In room 3 we have been learning about making our writing exciting! We had a go at describing this picture...
The rain drips down onto the pond. The petals are shiny like diamonds. The twig is like a little boat. The frog is on the boat scared. By Jaxon
As the dribbling rain drips into my little ears I am frightened as I am clinging onto the stalk. As the white petals float down like pillows falling from the sky the leaf floats across the dark pond with a little frog like a little person is holding it the frog was frightened as he floated along the pond. By Charlotte
The rain drizzled and drizzled onto the lumpy flower pond. The wind pushed the petals around the boat. By Olivia
The falling rain is like snow splashing into the flower pond. The yellow and white petals look like diamonds in the pond the little twig and the big twig made a boat. The frog made it. When he got on his boat he clang onto the boat. He was frightened. The frog was very scared he clung on tight he didnt want to let go because he will fall off. By Hayley
The rain drizzled and drizzled onto the lumpy flower pond. The yellow and white petals are floating on the soft water. The stick is like an umbrella and it is flopping down and keeping the frog dry. By Thomas
The rain is falling like a hail storm. The petals fell from a big tree like diamonds. The twig had a leaf on it. The frog held the branch scared. By Alexis.
The rain dropped down onto the peaceful river it all began in one day. The tiny quiet petals hushed through the river. The frog built a twig boat he pushed the boat on the dark water. By Vincent
